Friday, March 26, 2010

Today I will...

Today I will ask you how
you are even though I know
you will scowl
and
be
short
(Fine). Today
I will smile when you enter
though I know you
will not acknowledge me
and will plug into
your white headphones. Today
I will remind you I can help
while I watch you spread yourself
over the table, and I will
listen as you tell me I don't
need your
assistance
. For today is the same
as any other day - I am here
and am waiting for you to say Yes

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  2. Had to fix some typos so you could understand what I meant. Too early in the morning and no coffee yet.

    I like this! I frankly wouldn't change much at all. Nice beginning, nice ending. Nice pacing and line breaks. Great job! And it speaks to the heart, too.

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  3. You'll never know you hurt me, baby ~

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  4. Thanks for the comments. I really need to check my blog more often!-D Appreciate my readers immensely.

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